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Hiding in my closet
With my doll in my arms
I close my eyes and
Cover my ears, and
Pretend that nothings happened
Usually daddy just hits
Mommy once or twice,
But I keep hearing her
Screaming and she begs
Him to stop, I
Hear him say that he
Hates her and he
Wants her to pay
I whisper a prayer for mommy
Because I don't know
What to do, suddenly
I start to cry and
Hope God helps her soon
I hear mommy give a scream so loud
Then it's silent....quiet as a mouse
I slowly come out of my closet
And start looking around the house
There I see mommy
On the kitchen floor,
Lying face down with
Blood all around her
I cry so hard while
holding my doll tight
My daddy is standing
Over her and in his hand
The bloody knife...
He looks at mommy
Then back at me
He looks crazy and
He says ever so softly
"You're a witness."
And I know what's coming
My daddy  starts walking
Towards me, with murder
In his dark eyes...
This is the story on
How me and my mommy died...
Stop abuse in families! :skullbones:

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:bulletblack:The photo used for this poem does not belong to me. I found it off Google.:bulletblack:
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Colin-Bentham Jun 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
hey this is pretty good. great image as well :)
missEyez Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
Colin-Bentham Jun 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
your welcome :)
Well written and the artwork goes so well with the poem.
It's so sad that this happens more than we think possible.
missEyez Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so very much :)
Spade-N Jan 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is really sad.... :(
But you wrote so good!
punx-chan89 Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but powerful and very emotional and to think that stuff like that happens quite often even if its not reported
missEyez Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the compliment, and yes the fact this stuff isn't reported suxx :(
punx-chan89 Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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