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Hiding in my closet
With my doll in my arms
I close my eyes and
Cover my ears, and
Pretend that nothings happened
Usually daddy just hits
Mommy once or twice,
But I keep hearing her
Screaming and she begs
Him to stop, I
Hear him say that he
Hates her and he
Wants her to pay
I whisper a prayer for mommy
Because I don't know
What to do, suddenly
I start to cry and
Hope God helps her soon
I hear mommy give a scream so loud
Then it's silent....quiet as a mouse
I slowly come out of my closet
And start looking around the house
There I see mommy
On the kitchen floor,
Lying face down with
Blood all around her
I cry so hard while
holding my doll tight
My daddy is standing
Over her and in his hand
The bloody knife...
He looks at mommy
Then back at me
He looks crazy and
He says ever so softly
"You're a witness."
And I know what's coming
My daddy  starts walking
Towards me, with murder
In his dark eyes...
This is the story on
How me and my mommy died...
Stop abuse in families! :skullbones:

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:bulletblack:The photo used for this poem does not belong to me. I found it off Google.:bulletblack:
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:iconcolin-bentham:
Colin-Bentham Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
hey this is pretty good. great image as well :)
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconcolin-bentham:
Colin-Bentham Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
your welcome :)
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rustymermaid Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
Well written and the artwork goes so well with the poem.
It's so sad that this happens more than we think possible.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so very much :)
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rustymermaid Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
welcome
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Spade-N Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is really sad.... :(
But you wrote so good!
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but powerful and very emotional and to think that stuff like that happens quite often even if its not reported
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missEyez Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the compliment, and yes the fact this stuff isn't reported suxx :(
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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prudradas Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:O so sad....but very powerful
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, it's what I was going for :)
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:iconprudradas:
prudradas Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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:iconvanescence:
Vanescence Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
I love it~~ <3
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you <3
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Vanescence Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
ur welcome <3
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Randomination22 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This poem is quite scary and haunting but I do like it indeed, it is very powerful. WOW!
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much!
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:iconxiongirl:
xiongirl Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Writer
wow... i just.... wow... that is all i can think of... wow...
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea it's a sad story :(
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:iconxiongirl:
xiongirl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Writer
:(
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:iconarisendreams:
ArisenDreams Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional General Artist
Such a sad and powerful photograph!
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea it is, it was hard trying to find the right one for the story
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:iconarisendreams:
ArisenDreams Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Professional General Artist
Well you certainly did find the right one, it really captures your attention meaning I then discovered your story too :thumbsup:
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow awesome, thanks
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
family violence sucks!
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea it does :cries:
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:iconjakfan15:
Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it should die in a hole
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
totally, and get cancer!
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:iconjakfan15:
Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol yea!
than chop it up with a chainsaw! :chainsaw:
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha totally
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
we're saying that violence should stop yet we are talking about being violent to violence! XD
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol haha oh yea
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GJManns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow!
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :bow:
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GJManns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're very welcome. What a powerful image.
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks again! :bow:
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GJManns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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Shilda143 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I agree to STOP abuse in families around the world
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:w00t: me too!
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ynocencia Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
deep , very well written , sadly stories like this are all too true :[
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much. And I much agree, abuse in this day and age just sucks!
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Kurda--Smahlt Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:cries: sorry if it made u upset :(
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:iconkurda--smahlt:
Kurda--Smahlt Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
No, it's just really sad..
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:iconmisseyez:
missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea it is :(
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ForestDwellerHouses Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
Beautifully done! along with a great story, AWESOME!!
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missEyez Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :bow:
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ForestDwellerHouses Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
Your so very welcome!
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