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I wrote this poem to prove a point about people. Why is it when people die by suicide, that's when they mention all the good about you? They say how you made a difference in this world and that no one can replace you...if you said it a little sooner, you probably could have saved someone's life. So don't wait to tell someone they're important :) and for those that have people who care, that's great! You are lucky :heart: This poem goes out to those that don't have anyone...
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origamiakatsuki101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this is beauty in the working
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missEyez Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you dearest <3
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origamiakatsuki101 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
no problem 
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Orec12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very good work on this. The the beginning gives the feel of a case of lovers deception, but that last part expertly delivers the meaning, like a punchline... Brilliant :)
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missEyez Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the kind words :)
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Orec12 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all, I really liked this :)
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SunShiny-Sunflower Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thumbs up xdd I've been wondering why people never tell nice things to each other until it's too late too. ._.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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SunShiny-Sunflower Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:heart:
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mlphipps1991 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Powerful. I like the structure and flow along with the overall meaning.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much hun :heart:
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ForgottenSoldierPAL Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My grandmother started this thing where at every birthday party, everyone goes around saying what they love about the birthday person.
She says its better to tell them now rather than tell them when they're in the ground.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg, that is something to live by. You're grandmother is awesome for that! :highfive:
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ForgottenSoldierPAL Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:highfive:
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RavensHiddenSoul Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Such a beautiful message, and so true it hurts. </3 My heart goes out to all those that this poem gives voice to, and those who are guilty because they didn't realize soon enough how great a difference their words can really make.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amen to that :heart:
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Marauderslover97 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
amazing, and i hate that. thanks for spreading the message, to appriciate people before, because they can possibly save them.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't thank me, it was a pleasure :hug:
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thats a very good point, beautifully and delicately written! I love it!
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much darrliingg :heart:
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing poem :heart::la: and you do raise an interesting point... why do people say good things about someone after death?
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for agreeing :)
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :D
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LetThereBeApples Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice indeed.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks :heart: :blowkiss:
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LetThereBeApples Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course ^^ :heart:
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LetThereBeApples Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart::heart::heart:
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Princess-Warrior Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
wow. that is incredibly powerful. amazing job!
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much :)
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shadow-gryphon Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Needed that today
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you needed it :)
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Moreuse Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
a very good point, and it is unfortionate that it is true.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very unfortunate :(
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Moreuse Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*hug*
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catelee2u Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very true
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. I makes you think.
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. It makes you think.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you hun <3
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ladymoonscar9828 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
amen
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ArtsyTiger Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I completely agree! I think I have a theory, obviously whenever someone feels their life is just so bad that they have to take their own life, there has to be a reason, yeah? Like bullying, or problems at home, etc. So once they're dead, everyone tries to shift the blame from themselves by saying nice things about the person who died so no one will think it was their fault that this person is dead. So really it's just people being all selfish and trying to seem like decent people. And this is a beautiful poem. :)
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's exactly my point. That's an even better than what I intended. It's like all the people who you never talk to say you all this nice shit about you, but it's like, where were you when I was alive? People are ridiculous.
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ArtsyTiger Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know! I wish people would stop being so damn immature and just accept that this person is dead and be geniunely sad about it, OR, they could just be a decent human being and be nice towards them while they were still alive, then maybe they'd still be alive! People can be so fake.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea you're telling me. It's just sad to see someone say something nice about person when they never really cared for them in the first place..it's ridiculous.
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ArtsyTiger Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just don't get why people only choose to say nice stuff once the person's dead, why couldn't they say that when they were alive? It's sad.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Totally agree :hug:
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7Demented Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with the message. I nearly committed suicide once myself, but then I was reminded that my friends and family cared about me, saving me from disaster.

Be nice. It could make their lifetime.
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missEyez Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree with you, but I'm talking about the people who don't care and when you're dead they say they care..
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7Demented Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kind of the same, isn't it?
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Steamland Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
its never abotu sucide silly, its abotu when any person dies they mention the good things about you. nice poem but invalid point.
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